RE: Hunger

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Kim I actually have to work to day. So I have sat down and read you stuff. I
AM DYEING TO, Yours Pats and Ryan's are waiting for me to down load to my
head. This my not be the feed back you want, but the last few weeks, I end
my day by reading your stories. It is like you let me come live in them for
a while. You touch my heart with the story. And I really can see Willow and
Cordillia deal because they need each other. They really have always had the
same issue of dealing with people. In high school Cordillia over compensated
and found emptiness. That was the big deal with Xander. She finally met
someone who could see the good in her. Watch her progress on Angel. Her fear
that she is being punished. The last EP. when she is pregnant. Hitting
Wesley in the head. deal with phantom Dennis, and the end were she throws
"the final stone: and kills the demon. She is a very strong person that
never sees herself worthy of any thing other then being pretty. Willow in a
way is the same but in reverse. Willow try's to be the smart on to fit in,
She never sees herself as beautiful. She hides it up, a geek title. Since
this women have been in the war for a while, it is not surprising to see
them strip away the outside and then find they need each other. The prophecy
dreams for Cordy must be had just as the immortal thing for willow.

Bottom line. I love your story, and yes I want more, Sorry I babble, good
stuff does that to me.

-----Original Message-----
From: ~~Kimber [mailto:kacoe@xxxxxxx]
Sent: Thursday, January 27, 2000 2:31 PM
To: BuffyLovesWillow; BuffyWantsWillow
Subject: [buffyloveswillow] Hunger


From: ~~Kimber <kacoe@xxxxxxx>

it's usually not above me to beg. . .and that's what I'm doing now. I'm a
little hungry
for feedback on the most recent part of 'Untitled (7/?)'. You guys are
always great with
feedback, don't get me wrong, but that part was a huge branch off for
me....I think I suck
at love scenes, that's why they're usually so vague. Also, I'm a little
lost on the next
part. I haven't even written one word for part 8 yet....I don't know if I
wanna close it
up and if I do, how. Any suggestions would be taken seriously....please
help! I see it
going into a sequel about our two fav immortal chicks....but I'd also like
to pull a
george lucas and do a prequel explaining the Willow/Cordelia and
Cordelia/Angel
releationships.........

Any ideas??

~~Kimber

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Joss: Sure Willow is bi! And she's getting it on with a man! To all you
fanboys out there:
Damn, I am an *evil bastard* ain't I?
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Riley: so far, well, the only thing that I know she likes is you.
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Willow: It's a good fight, Buffy, and I want in.
Buffy: I kinda love you.
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Buffy: This thing . . .it scares me. I need my Willow.
Willow: Awww.
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