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Well, I've been derelict in my duties as a feedback writer. Okay,
what's new;
Anne-Lise; Hmm, the girls in Ireland? Me Irish heart leapsup
with joy at the prospect. Hope to see how this one plays out. And if
you're worried about your skill as a writer, don't be. You're doing fine
so far. And besides, the only way to improve is to keep writing.
You're on a roll, don't stop now.
Cilia; Yeehah! Two Worlds is back! And Buffy and Willow
are finally facing the mistakes of their past and the prospects of their
future. Looks like you have the makings of a slambang finish to this
wonderful series. And I'm gonna be along for the ride.
Shyfox; Greetings, fellow co-conspirator. Nice to see things
shaping up for our favorite pair in Stranger In My House. They're just so
close, if they'd only look a little further at each other. Lovely work,
you capture their relationship perfectly.
Angelina; My Slayer Lady ended with a laugh. Fun stuff, though Ican
imagine how a certain ferret-faced school principal is going to handle the
aftermath. Hey, could you just Turn Snyder and let our girls have a shot
at her?
Soren; Fimbul? Okay, I'm intrigued. Especially if you
follow through as you have done and show our girls together in various
combinations. Strong start, let's see more. And I loved the
fragment.
Angel; Nice to see your story shaping up, was afraid for our girls
for a sec. For the record, I'm routing for Joyce to see the light,
especially if she has that tumor in your universe as well. If this
follows suit with the show, she won't have much time to mend fences with her
daughter.
Tony McD; The Tom Clancy of the Buffy/Willow shipper movement strikes
again! Your ratcheting tension in Trinity's Child is great. Nowit's
time for Trinity to strike back. Can't wait to see the Watchers Council
hauled before the World Court for their crimes. Are they just control
freaks or are they hiding something more sinister?
Sam I Am; not associated with BtVS, but I loved the funny stuff you sent
us. The Dr. Seuss computer piece had me on the floor. Had me rolling
on the floor, had me rolling out the door, had me laughing in my seat, had me
laughing on my feet-- oh sorry, got carried away.
Spik; It's Grim Up North. Another strong start from a new
writer. Can't wait to see what trouble our girls get into in
England. Maybe they'll confront the Watchers Council. That's always
fun.
Shadow; more sneak peeks, more snippets, can't wait to see you flesh out
one or more of your ideas. Looks like fun.
Well, that's all I can think of for now. Later, taters.
Kirayoshi
"God does not play dice with the universe; He plays an ineffible game of
His own devising, which might be compared, from the perspective of all the other
players(ie., everybody), to being involved in an obscure and complex version of
poker in a pitch-dark room, with blank cards, for infinite stakes, with a Dealer
who won't tell you the rules and who smiles all the
time."
--Neil Gaiman and Terry Pratchett "Good Omens" |