Re: FIC: Still Strugglin' [4/4?]

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

Red Willow,

" Can't believe I missed this; it must have arrived while I was
writing my feedback for part 3

Stupid, perennially clogged inbox.

" Nice handling of the Riley/Tara questions, but don't be too hard on
the big lug, 'kay? He may be wrong for Buffy (and totally lack
chemistry with her), but he's not that bad a guy, IMO.

" Re: the sex: First impression: Hominahominammmmmaammmaaaamma!

Second impression: Um, I think you've passed "R" a few stops back
(basically when we had the details on fingers going into places).
You're really not supposed to do that here, given that we have members
as young as 13. That's what the BuffyWantsWillow list is for, and since
your membership data notes that you're over 18, there's no reason why
you can't be posting there. Simply follow the link on the main page or
go directly to http://groups@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx/group/buffywantswillow

After all, we wouldn't want to be in trouble for exposing the youth of
the world to sensuous red-hot fem-fun, would we? (Okay, I grant you,
it's probably good for them, but I don't make the laws.)

My basic rule on this is: implied below-the-waist action is an "R";
explicit details of how good it feels, etc. is an "NC-17" and thus meant
for the adult list.

" Glad you've got ideas for more; I've really enjoyed this (not just
for the sex) and look forward to where you go.  

Can't wait till next week! (okay, technically, I guess I already have
<g> My bad.)

Dan