Re: Fic: Just Beneath the Surface (1/?)

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

Willow X,

Pardon the lateness of the fb, but I just wanted to tell you how much I
like this one. Buffy's blaming herself for all of Willow's choices
because of "Choices" is very much in character, and I also loved her
shame and resentment that Xander had been able to get through to Willow
where she hadn't. Bless you for rewriting the "ST, SP" scene so Buffy
actually talks about important things rather than giving Will the "you
did a spell?? This was YOUR fault, bitch??" face she did on the show.
And I love the idea that the "strength-sharing" is on more levels than
just the physical and that the psychic bonding reveals the emotional
secrets between the two.

Can't wait to see where you're going from here. Well, actually, I guess
I **have** been waiting to see, so come on, give us more :)

Dan