Well written little fic. Only a couple or so
technical errors, which isn't too many to be
distracting. I liked the playful atmosphere
(Buffy's
foot, Anya's phone manners, etc.) at The Magic Box,
however, having never seen SG-1, I didn't get
anything
out of that portion of the fic.
Is this a stand-alone piece, or do you plan to do
more
with it? By itself it doesn't really seem to have a
reason behind it, though maybe I missed it.
Kris
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"People who don't read cheat themselves. By not
reading, they limit what they can achieve, make
mistakes they could avoid, and miss opportunities
that could improve their lives. Finally, as the gaps
in their knowledge become apparent, they must
reconcile themselves to not being taken seriously."
~Morton Blackwell
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