RE: FF A Story

["Penner, Jon" <JPenner@xxxxxxxxx>]

Perfect for the stressed, tired and hassled among us. Absolutely 
in keeping with the fast paced soundbite generation X'er environment 
in which we live. (I think that makes the critique slightly longer than 
the story so I shall end here)
Loved it.
JP

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> It was day. Buffy and Willow were there. They were
> touching. They were probably about to do something
> really hot and steamy, right after they said something
> that'd make you want to cry. Like, romantic, if you
> catch my drift. So whatever the hell it was, it was
> about to happen and...
> 
> TBC in Chapter 2
> 
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