Re: FIC A Higher Power

[Anthony Misa <akiraajl@xxxxxxxxxx>]

--- the keeper <keeper444@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> Well this is it my first shot at this fanfic
> writing. Hope ya' all like
> it.
> Alex
> 
>  
> Title: A Higher Power (1/?)
> Author: Alex
> Feedback: Please any comments or suggestions to:
> keeper444@xxxxxxxxx 
> (please be kind for the first time in over 30 years
> I'm a virgin at
> something!) 
> Summary: Ancient forces are forced to take a hand in
> Buffy & Willow's 
> relationship. 
> Spoilers: I don't know I put them in college because
> that's where they 
> are now
> Disclaimer: The characters of Buffy Willow Giles
> and any others from 
> BTVS are the property of Joss Whedon and Mutant
> Enemy etc. No
> infringement of any kind intended. 
> Notes: Willow is worried Buffy has a bad night 
> A Higher Power (1/?) 
> Willow was sitting on the Slayer's bed hugging Mr
> Gordo to her chest,
> her legs drawn up as she gently rocked staring
> intently at the door
> waiting impatiently for it to open. More worried
> than usual the hollow
> feeling in her chest and the lump in her throat was
> telling her that
> something was definitely wrong with her Buffy.
> However the actual nature
> of the trouble eluded her. Buffy had been getting
> back from her patrols
> latter each night. Each night she was exhausted to
> the point of collapse
> and though she denied it Willow could tell that she
> wasn't bouncing back
> like she used to. It was breaking Willow's heart to
> see the person she
> cared about even more than life itself go out every
> night to face what
> ever danger the Hellmouth might throw at her when
> they both knew Buffy
> was not in any condition to fight them. 
> Now she was more than 2 hours over due and even
> though she had promised
> not to go out alone after sunset, especially not to
> look for Buffy on
> patrol, Willow was considering facing her friends
> anger and going out to
> find Buffy anyway. She just couldn't get over the
> feeling that the
> Slayer was in serious trouble 
> <>I can't loose her, I couldn't go on without her<>
> she thought to
> herself and a sob escaped her throat<>Don't do that
> !!<> she yelled at
> herself <>No negative thoughts! Buffy is
> fine...Buffy is safe...Buffy
> is....GORGEOUS!!<> a mischievous smile played over
> her lips as she
> thought of her friends near perfect athletic
> body.[stop that bad Willow
> bad bad Willow]her chest tightened as she recalled
> the warmth of Buffy's
> body pressing against her when ever they
> hugged.<>friendly hugs only<>
> she reminded herself. Willow knew that she really
> truly deeply loved
> with every part of her body and soul but she had
> done anything about it
> and everything she could to deny the reality of
> those feelings, ending
> with her disastrous relationship with Oz, but that
> was so over now and
> she'd been forced to face the truth . 
> Eventually she learned to settle for the platonic
> friendship Buffy
> offered and simply learn to live with the constant
> frustration of
> unrequited love. She just knew that it would all
> work out as long as
> Buffy never found out, not ever. 
> Willow's thoughts were interrupted by the door to
> their room flew open,
> slamming loudly against the wall, revealing a figure
> leaning on the door
> frame to hold herself up. 
> Willow gasped when she realized it was her best
> friend and roommate (not
> to mention her entire world). 
> Worry overcame control " Buffy" 
> Buffy was barely recognisable under all the dirt and
> blood her whole
> body heaving under her effort to breath.Willow
> jumped off the bed and
> ran to the Slayer's side. Buffy raised her head and
> looked into the deep
> dark green eyes of her closest and dearest friend
> and smiled weakly.
> "Hey Wills!"Buffy whispered breathlessly "rough
> slayage tonight." She
> tried to chuckle but was to weak. 
> Willow pulled Buffy's arm over her shoulders and
> wrapped her free arm
> around Buffy's waist and helped her across the room
> to her bed
> end part 1........................................
> 
> Ther you go please let me know what you think.
> A
> 
> No matter where you go - there you are.
> 
> Hurt her and I'll beat you to death with a shovel.
> Willow
> 
>

Exellent start!!! Want to know if Willow figures why
Buffy is becoming burnth out.... Continue writing....

akiraajl 
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