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Re: [buffywantswillow] FF: Unexpected Surprises



Wonderful. I stepped over a few typos and one or the other grammar mistake but nothing
that couldn't be fixed with another beta check.
Just the overuse of the word 'love' and its diverse other forms, like 'lover' or 'loving'.
That was actually all that bothered me.

Oh and beautiful ending *g*

Can't wait to see your other one, the one with the extra scenes.

Keep on going

Quin





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