Reviews for Hokus Pokus? lsulaw h.bonial@attbi.com 2003-04-26 id # 51 Interesting, I really liked it. But the ending just lost me. You were doing great, and then you rushed it. This would have been a great first chapter to a much longer fic. Please consider revising and lengthening the story. It would be really good! Freakey doggy_freak@msn.com 2004-01-29 id # 259 it's good but i have to agree with lsulaw... you rushed it at the end, you should've made it a longer fic! But it's good. really