Re: FIC: Untitled (6/?)

[Anthony Misa <akiraajl@xxxxxxxxx>]

I wish you would somehow keep Willow Immortal!!! Buffy
has her vampire and Slayer abilities.... Having Willow
as a normal mortal would give Buffy's enemies an
exellent target... Why this posses a problem is
because innormous opponents will come after the most
poerfull vampire in the world!!! Hope you continue
this universe after the story is finish!!! 
--- ~~Kimber <kacoe@xxxxxxx> wrote:
> From: ~~Kimber <kacoe@xxxxxxx>
> 
> 1. The slime flies
> 2. Cordelia kicks some head
> 3. Willow finds closure
> 4. Giles worries (what else is new?)
> 
> Have fun. . .this one is peppered with an extra
> helping of my sick, twisted humor.<IMLH>
> 
> ~~Kimber
> ----------------------------------------
> 
> Title: Untitled (6/?)
> Author: Kimber (kacoe@xxxxxxx)
> Disclaimer: All BTVS characters belong to Joss
> Whedon and Mutant Enemy.
> Summary: (No summary yet.)
> Spoilers: Everything is fair game. This is set
> three years or more after Buffy and
> Willow graduate college.
> Distribution: Pat Kelly, Rodrigo, Gary Thompson,
> Syrenslure and Serendipity. Anyone
> else, e-mail me please.
> Author's Notes: The more feedback I get the more
> fic I write?.nuff said.
> Thoughts are enclosed in < > and flashbacks are
> enclosed in <<< >>>
> -----------
> 
> ?Giles??
> 
> ?Hmm??
> 
> ?This thing with Quentin. I didn?t like him very
> much to begin with but . . .?
> 
> ?It bothers you we left him in the cell with Ethan.?
> 
> ?Yeah. What if he was telling the truth? Then
> we?ve sealed the fate of an innocent man.?
> 
> ?Quentin was hardly innocent, Buffy, I can assure
> you of that. Remember his explanation
> about Willow and Cordelia?s connection??
> 
> ?Yeah. I felt like a real jack-ass.?
> 
> ?Well, he was completely correct. He knew of their
> connection in detail and he knew that
> Willow gave Cordelia her ring. You and I were the
> only other people that knew she had the
> ring.?
> 
> ?You knew??
> 
> ?Um, yes, well. . I was out in the hall when you and
> Cordelia were exchanging words. Only
> that time I didn?t get caught.?
> 
> ?You were lurking? You?re the last one I?d ever
> think of to pull an Angel.?
> 
> ?I fear for your safety, Buffy, all of you. If
> anything were to ever happen, I don?t
> think I?d ever forgive myself for it.? He sighed. 
> ?Yet here we sit, Willow is Immortal
> and you?re a vampire. I just feel like I?ve failed
> all of you.?
> 
> She reached out and touched his shoulder. ?We?ll be
> okay, Giles. We?re gonna go in
> there, kick some demon ass and go home.?
> 
> He smiled at her and nodded.
> 
> He noticed that Willow was being led in by Spike and
> brought her attention to it. ?Look.
> . .I can?t believe it!?
> 
> Willow was arm in arm with Spike. He was leading
> her up a set a stairs. She caught their
> attention, motioned to Spike and gave the ?okay?
> signal with her hand. He looked up and
> nodded. It was done in an instant, but they got the
> message.
> 
> Buffy whispered. ?He?s on our side.?
> 
> He nodded. ?Looks that way. We could use all the
> help we can get.?
> 
> ---------------------
> 
> ?My fellow kindred. . your Queen has arrived!?
> 
> Cheers erupted from the crowd of 20 or so demons. 
> They pumped their weapons in the air
> and chanted ?Long live the Queen!?.
> 
> Spike handed Willow off to Richard and bowed low. 
> From the door they just came through,
> Angelus emerged and took his place on the other side
> of the stage. He and Spike exchanged
> a brief look then stared out to the crowd.
> 
> ------------
> 
> ?Giles! Did you see that??
> 
> ?I saw. Let?s hope it means what we think it does.?
> 
> ------------
> 
> Cordelia was led out by another demon and thrown to
> the ground in front of the stage.
> 
> Richard spoke. ?The hour of evolution is upon us. 
> Soon we will be the perfect race, the
> only race worthy of inhabiting this earth! Even as
> I speak, you?re old Queen is dying.
> She has passed her prime and must be put to rest. 
> Will the new Queen present to take her
> place, we will achieve what we?ve fought so long
> for. Immortality! We will be
> unstoppable!?
> 
> ?The Queen must die! Long live the Queen!? The
> chant took on an eerie rhythm, pounding
> out each syllable in their brains. The pitch they
> reached was inhuman and they all had to
> hold their ears, fearing their eardrums would
> literally explode in their heads.
> 
> ?Now! Let the ritual begin!?
> 
> Cheers erupted again and suddenly five demons
> appeared from an adjacent corridor. They
> wore robes encrusted with jewels and carried daggers
> in both hands. Silently they marched
> over to the female and in unison knelt in front of
> her in a circle.
> 
> The creature stirred, but didn?t really move. Buffy
> noticed that her skin had taken on a
> pale gray color and her movements were slow and
> awkward. She was indeed dying, probably
> from producing so many offspring. <Screwed to
> death.> She gave a little chuckle.
> 
> Again in unison the grabbed her and carried her up
> to the stage. A stone slab emerged
> from beneath the floor and she was placed on it,
> gently. They shackled her arms, wrists,
> neck and torso. She struggled the tiniest bit, but
> it was no use. She was then gagged
> and a black hood was tied to her head.
> 
> The five demons turned to Richard and waited. He
> nodded his head and together they raised
> their right hands and the daggers were slammed into
> various parts of her body. The
> undertook the task of carving into her flesh, her
> head, her arms. Green ooze flew
> everywhere and the crowd scrambled to the edge of
> the stage. The demons continued to cut
> her up into small, manageable pieces and began to
> throw the pieces into the crowd. Giles
> noticed one demon caught a piece of the flesh and
> pushed his way to the front of the
> stage. He caught Willow?s attention and hungrily
> devoured it. Almost immediately he took
> on a deep green luster. This entire display
> couldn?t be described as anything but
> controlled chaos. Each demon that caught a piece of
> flesh did the same in turn.
> 
> He leaned in and whispered to Buffy. ?They?re
> courting her. Trying to prove themselves
> worthy.?
> 
> She grimaced. ?Ugh, that?s disgusting!?
> 
> ?It?s an animalistic mating ritual. The one that
> digests the most is considered the
> dominant male in the room.?
> 
> She shook her head and turned away from the carnage
> in front of her. ?Giles. . does that
> mean they. . ?
> 
> ?They?re vying for her attention. I suppose you
> could say the one with the best green
> wins. Then he?ll mate with her and . .?
> 
> ?Nope, no way. . not gonna happen. NOBODY is gonna
> mate with her. . .especially those
> things!?
> 
> ------------------
> 
> 
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