Re: Whole 'Coming Out' thing/FIC:One Day At A Time

["Jon Penner" <jonpenner@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

A hell of a magnum opus MR - I really enjoyed it, and a joy to
read a story with no glaring spelling errors or odd commas
disrupting the flow. The only constructive criticism I would offer
would be in the slightly jerky style (you did ask) but a superb
start. I hope we see a lot more of your work in future,
thanks,

JP

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