Re: Fic: The Wolf Within (19/19)

["Scott " <LordBowler@xxxxxxxxx>]

--- In buffyloveswillow@xxxxxxxxxxx, Erin <erin@h...> wrote:
> Ok, folks. This wraps up the monster. Not that there won't be a
> sequel if enough people ask. :) When I started this, I wanted to
> write something, anything that would last longer than my usual
> 300-line short story. Well hell, now I can't write a story that
> short anymore, so I guess it worked. :)
>
> If anyone is missing any parts, you can get them from my website
> (address below), or email me and I'll send it to you in text.
>
> Hope you guys like.

I like a lot. As for a sequel "Yes please." Quite frankly the story
doesn't seem finished to me. Well OK the main story seems finished,
but you had all this neat stuff with the Black Spiral's leader going
on that begs for more. I really doubt he's the sort to just leave
Willow alone after she released Oz from the Wyrm. And who is killing
his flunkies right under his nose? For that matter there's Chris and
Nichole. I wish them the best, but would like to point out that
contraceptives aren't 100% effective. And we still haven't seen how
Xander, Joyce, Anya, Spike et al will react to both Willow being a
werewolf and her and Buffy's new relationship. In other words,
there's lots of ground left to cover in this universe you've started.

More please.